Clear Sky over the Sands · Autumn Thoughts
Yuan dynasty・Ma Zhiyuan
Classical Chinese-style Ballad
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The evening sun sinks westward; a heartbroken traveler is at the world’s edge.
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- 无事小狗仙
- 2026-10-24 11:26
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Withered vines, old trees, crows at dusk; a little bridge, flowing water, homes; an ancient road, the west wind, a lean horse.
The evening sun sinks westward; a heartbroken traveler is at the world's edge.
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Withered vines twine around old trees, and crows at dusk return to the branches; water flows beneath a little bridge, with homes beside it. Along the ancient road, the west wind blows against a lean horse. The sun slowly sets, while the heartbroken traveler remains far from home.
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天净沙 (Tian Jing Sha): A tune title belonging to the Yue mode; this work is a short sanqu lyric. 昏鸦: Crows at dusk. 古道: An ancient road. 西风: The autumn wind.
断肠人: a person in profound grief, here the traveler far from home. 天涯: a place far from one’s homeland, not necessarily the literal geographical end of the world.
The first three lines link nine groups of images; there is no need to supply a story for each. “小桥流水人家”—“a little bridge, flowing water, and homes”—may also contrast a life with a home to return to with that of the traveler.
Introduction
Introduction: In this very brief song, Ma Zhiyuan expresses an autumn traveler’s sorrow. The work has only five lines, and the figure’s grief is stated explicitly only in the last. Before that, the ancient road, setting sun, and birds returning to their nests have gradually prepared the emotion.
Commentary
Withered vines, old trees, and crows at dusk lend the scene a desolate air, while the little bridge, flowing water, and homes preserve the peace of everyday life. Precisely because others have settled homes, the wanderer on the ancient road seems all the more without a place to return to.
The final two lines draw time and the traveler together: the sun has set, yet the person remains at the world's edge. There is no lengthy outpouring; the arrangement of images already carries both narrative and feeling, giving this brief song a deep lingering resonance.
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A Homeward Light on the Ancient Road
Fourteen years after leaving home, Gu Chi leads his old horse Yuqian to the market. Selling it will give him enough money for the boat fare home. But when the buyer lifts the old saddle, he recognizes a military brand on the horse’s back, grips the reins, and refuses to discuss the original price. Man and horse flee to a small inn beside an ancient road. There is water beneath the bridge and lamplight inside, yet the old brand on the horse’s back still stands between him and the road home.
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